like love, but less mess
I am double-talked
stuttering
& nothing says I love you better
than silence.
We contradict the classics,
tie our tongues
in attempts to articulate
that which swirls us-
whirlpools & minutes long kisses
spinning in circles
while woven in stationary positions
we dive
scuba gear regalia & only surface
to praise the heavens
for moments like these.
.................................................
half moons
He asked her name,
her dreams,
noticed how her hair
created half moons with the shadow
laughed in the soft
of thoughts
only his own,
called her
the disappearing poet
and made love to her words.
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"nothing says I love you better
than silence."
a sad state of affairs that is all too common.
i blame it on the abundance of opportunity today's society offers.
or education.
or cars.
or anything that might explain why we just can't seem to keep our shit together.
you are such a good writer, Meli.
but i've said that before...



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and you are such a sweetheart.
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wonderous


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it's been a... uhm, well... uhm. Your avatar is distracting me.
Thanks for the claps, darlin'.
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beautimous
i'm on night shifts, so my brain isn't quite up to lengthy comments..
but this is so serenly gorgeous..
Lovely Meli


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lol I'm on second shift now... and my brain has went on strike because of it... so I know the feeling.
Thank you.
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beautiful!
Both pieces are so perfect and always, you bring such emotion and a sigh~

Lynda


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Thank you, always.
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