Vengeful eyes of betrayed soul
Searching...
Waiting...
Watching...
Boiling...
Orange spreading in horizon,
Tombstone beckoning back...
...One more night wasted.
Author notes
Nocturnal prompt
A contest entry
- PIF quickie - 20/10/15 - 22 by Namita.
300 points, ended July 20, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow!! A very interesting take on the prompt .Very mysterious. Best of luck in the contest!!
Luv,
Candy
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Wow such a ghostly write
With sadness and ones pain. Excellent write
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great write filled with nice imagery....
Best of luck!
Lynda
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Thank you very much...
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Intrigingly penned. Very nice imagery!!
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Thanks a lot for the comments!
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sadly beautiful. love boiling, such images there... great write...good luck and have fun.
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Glad you liked the poem When I thought nocturnal, a ghost was the first thing that I thought of And I wanted it to be a vengeful ghost too, but one that doesn't have its pay back time tonight!
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