fingers tingle skin
in wetter words
whispered
licked softly
from drier lips
of secrets surfaced
bursting bubbles
of antiquated anticipation
A contest entry
- PIF quickie - 20/10/15 - 22 by Namita.
300 points, ended July 20, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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licked softly
from drier lips
Wow! I had a dream about this last night. Maybe it was the warmth of my bedroom that set it off, then again it could have been the tequila last night. -
A very beautiful poem!! I loove the title! And the last lines were killer. Great job. Best of luck in the contest
Luv,
Candy
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Oy!
Love those bursting bubbles and
antiquated anticipation
Oh Yes
What a Journey into wetter words
Thank You for sharing this!
Many blessings to You in the contest
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Excellent job! Loved the flow and imagery...
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beautiful!
Such lovely words and wonderful alliteration
Excellent poem ...soft and lovely...
Lynda
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oh yeah, and the title = awesome
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So solid, beautiful, and concise.
Your poetry just gets better and better and better *an hour later* and better and--LOL Seriously, you're on a roll. Keep it up.
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short and sweet ... nice
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