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antiquated anticipation

 

fingers tingle skin

in wetter words

whispered

 

licked softly

from drier lips

of secrets surfaced

 

bursting bubbles

of antiquated anticipation

 

 

 

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  • omega13
    July 20, 2007

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    licked softly
    from drier lips

    Wow! I had a dream about this last night. Maybe it was the warmth of my bedroom that set it off, then again it could have been the tequila last night.

  • Namita
    July 20, 2007

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    A very beautiful poem!! I loove the title! And the last lines were killer. Great job. Best of luck in the contest

    Luv,
    Candy

  • Desire gold member
    July 19, 2007

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    Oy!

    Love those bursting bubbles and
    antiquated anticipation
    Oh Yes
    What a Journey into wetter words
    Thank You for sharing this!

    Many blessings to You in the contest
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • sunflowerpoet
    July 19, 2007
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    Excellent job! Loved the flow and imagery...


  • poet2angels gold member
    July 19, 2007

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    beautiful!
    Such lovely words and wonderful alliteration
    Excellent poem ...soft and lovely...

    Lynda


  • Tangled Angle
    July 19, 2007
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    oh yeah, and the title = awesome

  • Tangled Angle
    July 19, 2007

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    So solid, beautiful, and concise.
    Your poetry just gets better and better and better *an hour later* and better and--LOL Seriously, you're on a roll. Keep it up.


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 19, 2007
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    short and sweet ... nice

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