Night splash flows
thunder's scent of captured moon,
wetter bondage
racing wild in heart-throb secrets,
cascading love
in seeking ocean.
A contest entry
- PIF quickie - 20/10/15 - 22 by Namita.
300 points, ended July 20, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful imagery and word-choice. Brillaint poem. I really like this write. Good luck in the contest!!
Luv,
Candy
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Splendid imagery, lovely write!
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This is such a lovely poem as it speaks to the reader on so many different levels....like all the subtle nuances of your words. Lovely!
~ Nicolette
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Such a beautiful poem I love the line "racing wild in heart-throb secrets"
so beautiful!
Lynda
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cascading love in seeking ocean...such beauty and longing invoked in these lines. good morning and great one here.
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Good morning.
Excellent poem, as usual. Your poems seem so solid to me, and concise. Yet so deep, and interesting.
I was just thinking about it yesterday, who are the best poets of AP.. I'd say you'd be one of the top 5.
Keep it up.. God gave you something extremely special.
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This is a beautiful take on the picture for this contest.
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Beautiful,
Another wonderfully created piece my brother,
thanks for sharing, and all the best in this contest!
Peace.
Timothy
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