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The Cry

Dagger stabbing pain,
unheard screams echo in the head,
the lump in throat
has more to it,
it's replica on the belly,
finally eased
with an infant's cry.

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Abstract Virus by markgrif. 525 points, ended July 18

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  • Blue Rew silver member
    July 20, 2007

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    This conveys much in a few well-chosen words.
    I felt the last three lines were the strongest.
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