drifted to a river bend;
taking wrong directions,
then surrendering
to gravitational consequence
& cascading towards voids
of regret-rapids
A contest entry
- PIF quickie - 20/10/15 - 22 by Namita.
300 points, ended July 20, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow! Nice [*doubts whether it's Tyler*]
Great job! I loove the last line - "regret-rapids"! Wonderful piece. Best of luck in teh contest!!
Luv,
Candy
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Oy!
Oh My
Those words...regret-rapids says so much in so little words
and Powerful piece penned with the gravitational consequence...
Oy!
Thank You for sharing this!
Many blessings to You in the contest
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Tyler this is pretty much hands down amazing... like all of your poems this blew me away! Very amazing! Rock oN! xoxo Meg
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woah this is awsome. it is powerful in words with strong imagery to go with it. i love the metaphor in it aswell. sends an awsome message out. well done
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That's a beautiful take on the picture prompt... Excellent imagery too.
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this is cool, love regret-rapids, such a metaphor for life and misdirection here...
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Thanks
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Your poems are well thought out and the depth of your knowledge leaves one like me to toss my hands up and wonder why I even try at times to go against you.
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lol, thanks.
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You my friend know its the truth.
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a deep write.. again, a lovely metaphor.. very gorgeous.. best of luck here.. luv and cheers, shuvi
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Thanks, good luck to you.
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hey, just saw ur piccy.. u do look like a poet!
PS - do i make sense?
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How many times in like we say these words,lol, perhaps not as poetictly as you have, nice one, hugs
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lol thanks.
-goes to read your poem-
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Hi,
Thanxx for entering. The prompt is the picture on the contest screen ~OR~ "Nocturnal". Best of luck!!
Luv,
Candy
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