In the eye of the Aye-Aye

Eyes lit, gazing
In the fullness
of the pouring moonlight

Searching
In the body of
rainforest's darkness

The delectable,
coconut.

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Prompt: Nocturnal

Aye-Aye is a species of lemur.

PIF quickie - 20/10/15 - 22 by Namita. 300 points, ended July 20, 2007, 8 entries
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Namita
July 20, 2007
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Wonderful write!! Aye-Aye! Good job! I love the last lines. A very enjoyeble and pleasant, yet powerful write. Wish you good luck in the contest!

Luv,
Candy
Desire
July 19, 2007
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Oy!
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw Love those words:
Delectable coconut
Now I am hungry

Wonderful piece penned!
Lemurs are adorable and those eyes
Just melts my Heart

Thank You for sharing this and what a Magnificent
take on the prompt

Many blessings to You in the contest
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
sunflowerpoet
July 19, 2007
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Oh,lovely!
wolfspiritguide
July 19, 2007

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i never knew that. will be good to remember it's not only something i heard on Popeye movies lol...
great write, very smooth and pretty.
Riftkin
July 19, 2007
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nice poem and great added information in the notes.
Namita
July 19, 2007

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Hi,
Thanxx for entering. The prompt is the picture on the contest screen ~OR~ "Nocturnal". Best of luck!!

Luv,
Candy