afternoon
weeding the lawn
a
d n e i n
a d l o
mist
A contest entry
- The Shape of Haiku by azure85.
790 points, ended July 30, 2007, 41 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like the season of dandelion mist and the image you've created here of that both by the haiku and lay-out, Alan.
Even reading it again makes me feel to sneeze!
Best wishes in the contest!
Jo
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excellent
hi anon - i love the excellent shape of this haiku. it is clever work from you - as per usual.
best wishes in the contest.
and good luck with everything,
myron.
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Thank you for entering our workshop/contest, "The Shape of the Haiku." Good luck.
afternoon
weeding the lawn
a
d n e i n
a d l o
mist
This is a very inventive haiku and the concrete form of the haiku adds much to the haiku. -
Oh...i love this dandelion mist a lot.Lovely shape...wonderful work!!
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lovely,expressive and simply original
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Oh, this is so cool. I love the dandelion in your haiku. Very inventive, and the shape does bring another depth to your haiku. Nicely done.
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Very original!
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Imaginative.
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