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A Little Sorrow Goes A Long Way

I must apologize for the confusion
as your squeezing added inches
into pink && purple tutus;
watching clumsy pirouettes
through stained glass.

Reprimanding your broken ankles
&& the wooden blocks
that ended your shoe ribbons


  -because they can't stand the pressure!


Tinkling music boxes
bring back tartan blankets
&& the five positions taught just before.

(have you forgotten them yet?)

Did the bar or the muscles give out first?
&& When did mirrors start scratching their own
interpretations?

Rosary beads come in different shades
of guilt && shame

but they can't save your soul!

 (Because you haven't got one. Have you?)

 

Opaque tights && silken joys

can't grace the damned.

 

(Maybe leather is a better option...)

Author notes

Used the last option, one of your titles...
wasn't really what I meant to write but it came out so I took it as a sign!

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  • Exodus gold member
    July 27, 2007
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    Even if it wasn't what you meant to write I love it =]
    And for just randomly picking a title you did a brilliant job (but what else do I expect from you? )

    Rosary beads come in different shades
    of guilt && shame
    but they can't save your soul!

    I love those three lines so-so much
    Thanks babe