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Baby Nick

When he looked at me
His big eyes green
I know he saw me
As i sister i mean
My baby brother giggled
I did too
He was so cute
He was so new
I love my brother
His name is Nick
I love him so
I wonder what he will be
When he grows old
He might be King
He might be a Singer
But to me he is always a
Winner

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  • xXGoddessofPainXx
    July 19, 2007

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    Oh wow see ur poetry is wonderful you don't have to worry.. If you enter i wil honour you for bieng the youngest poet.. good work