I can die
This very moment
If you'll just hold me
In your mighty arms
I am the one
Who twist and then
On my lonely bed
Missing your every touch
Things were so good
We were always in love
Your kisses made me feel good
Then like a strom
She enter our love nest
Breaking each straw
Bringing pains
You part away from me
But I know something tells me
You're still in love with me
And the heartbeat of yours
Beats for our love.
So lets get back
Our moment of love..our love.
1,July,2007*
Author notes
Love poems are best sad poems.
A contest entry
- Best Of Broken Hearts (or revenge) by emLeejo.
600 points, ended August 5, 2007, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Truly expresses the deepness of real love and the pain, if another disturbes the natural balance of love. Really well done, my friend. Love, D.
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Beautiful.... This one really got me right in the heart. its exactly what im going through right now. Thanks for doing such a great job putting the situation into words. The emotions are so touching.
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that was a good poem i liked it...i think every one can basically base that on their ex whether they get back together or not...but yh its a very good poem i liked it
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that was very good... i liked it.. it was like the perfect love story for me and my ex... minus the getting back together.. but that was his chioce.. lol err... but neways that was a great write good luck in the contest... btw. i liked the background with the yellow. lol. nice job
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