CHEATING HEARTS
Coming home to a different person each night
Hiding my true feelings from the one that awaits me at home
Every night another passionate encounter
Always leaving me feeling so lost and alone
Time will soon find me and I will confess
I just don't know how to tell her right now
Never did I expect for it to end up like this
Giving in to this terrible sin is nothing that I can be proud
Holding their hearts in the palm of my hand
Each one so innocent, loving, and kind
Always needing to feel loved and accepted,
Racing hearts beating together in a love so blind
Trust can never be gained, forgiveness is obsolete
Straying away into this deceptive life has made me so incomplete
By: Jeremy0826
Author notes
My name is Jeremy0826
Thank you Krys for this sweet and lovely
contest!
A contest entry
- Friends Are Forever 2 ~ For My AP friends Only~ by Angel With No Halo.
800 points, ended July 26, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I completely forgot to add HM's so I really screwed up.. I am so sorry.. you were supposed to get an HM
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WOW.. this is something I just could never picture you doing to anyone!!!!It was very descriptive and I sensed your sweet nature with these words..:
"Each one so innocent, loving, and kind
Always needing to feel loved and accepted,"
I know that any woman would be lucky to have you and that you would NEVER be like this... but that is besides the point.. LOL. You have a wonderful acrostic here.. full of emotion. Thank you for entering sweety!!
Love,
~Krys~
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Thank you so much!
Hey Krys! Thanks a lot for your comments and applause on this one. I am so glad that you liked it and no, I would never do these things to anyone. Thanks for holding this contest my friend!
Jeremy
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Wow Jeremy. You have described such a horrible thing for a person to do. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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Another wonderful poem from your talented pen. You have a way of making the reader think. My favorite part of the poem is "forgiveness is obsolete." I have never thought of forgiveness as being obsolete, but in the case of this poem and the story it tells, I guess it would be. I myself would never have thought of putting those two words together. You my friend, are indeed a wonderful poet. Good luck in the contest. Your friend in Poetry, Mysty Rain
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