You broke my future heart
when your anger touched my face
You commited an act
which I can never erase
But you can.
Cut off your hand.
Then I'll take you back.
Author notes
I just had a lecture about domestic abuse, this is a message to myself in the future if I ever find myself in such a situation. I will not forgive a man who would hit me, I will not. Future self you had better remember this.
option 4e - 'big girls don't cry' - so why was she crying? and what do you do instead of crying was what this made me think about, this poem expresses those things, I would cry if he hit me but would kick him out even if it made me cry more, there can be tears and strength to me.
A contest entry
- Best Of Broken Hearts (or revenge) by emLeejo.
600 points, ended August 5, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 5 options for the creative poet (14) by bananasfoster42.
525 points, ended September 24, 2007, 10 entries
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Comments
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this is a very intresting poem. i like it. thanks for entering.
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that. is true. and i hope no person would take someone back that hit them, but it made me giggle with the. if you cut off your hand part.. that was good. but great write. and good luck
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