"I love you,"
I shot.
You were
an innocent victim.
A contest entry
- 10/10/10 by Hadji Murad.
300 points, ended July 19, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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hmm
this is interesting. it was very short yet very impactful and very strong. your words are poweful. keep penning! 
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Short and strong. This one well...love can be gorgeous or just plain suck :)) I don't think there really is an in between anymore, just great or horrible and that's that :)) Excellent piece.
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Interesting. Short and sweet and left with so many questions. Very well done, leaves you wanting more.
Nice work, keep it goin'
Creatress -
beautiful love i honestly do hope that you win the contest you were very creative with this i loved the whole piece very creative in style and expression ~ jewels ~
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not totally clear. Very haunting.
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Wow, interesting and definately strong yet stand-offish. Loved it. And within 10 words, definately strong in an abstract way.
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wow, this is a bit werid to me but i think i get it a bit, i think you did a great job on this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Ok, so I enjoyed this, it's definitely a passionate piece. I like the theme with this poem. Nice job and good luck.
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