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Fists Full Of Rage

She dumped me cause she
found a better man.

I did everything for her
I even quit my lifes work for her.

I gave her everything in me
even sold my grandfathers clock
so she could be happy.

I loved that old clock
it was the only thing I
ever had.

She told me that she loved me
and would never leave me.

She did,
she let me go.

I can't belive I let her
come back to me.

I'm just a sucker in love
no matter how much I hate her.

I love her so much
so I thought I'd give her a second chance.

I am still waiting for her to hurt me
still waiting for her to leave.

I can tell you one thing
no matter how small it is
there is still hope.

It may not be much
but it is still there.

Believe me when I say that.

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  • bruntbeauty
    July 31, 2007

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    It's a good poem but I've learned from experience that you should never give anyone a second chance. She'll kill you with your decision in the end. This is a fair warning so I hope you rethink your decision.


    • Frozensolid gold member
      August 2, 2007
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      yeah. . .i didn't let her back in. she only wanted to run to me to get away from him.


  • RainDripsBlood
    July 18, 2007

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    if this really happened to u, u should read my poem "You just had ta do it" i'm not in the contest but u kno

  • emLeejo
    July 18, 2007

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    awh. im sorry if this happened to you like seriously. but great write.. good emotion. and wish you the best of luck in this contest and with her

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