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Emptiness

My heart
Is a bucket.
A bucket filled
With water.
A bucket with
The bottom
cut out.

The water has
Fallen through.
Sploosh, splash, shoosh.
The water
Hits the floor.
Drip, drip
like tears.

The useless bucket
Is abandoned.
Abandoned like me,
Left behind
The smelly shed.
Bought, used,
abused, ignored.

Author notes

I wrote this after my boyfriend left me for a few days to do something NOT WITH ME.

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Comments

  • BrokenHeart666
    August 4, 2007
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    I love it

    I love this poem.
    I think it was amazing.


  • elfdragongnome
    July 23, 2007

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    beautiful...just beautiful

    I am so sorry
    That I ever
    Abandoned you.
    I hope
    One (1) day
    W e
    C a n
    F i x
    T h e BROKENSHED
    . . . . together