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[ my home lies ]

my home lies
amidst a great span of nothing

and my heart is full
of startlingly beautiful
things of little significance


I ache at the splendor
that stretches across nowhere
from horizon to horizon

I love no ones
one hundred miles from here
no one has heard the names
that fall soft as prayers from my lips

our anonymity shields
our small lives.

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  • Cup-a-Joe
    July 19, 2007
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    Very Creative.

    I also treasure small stuff, not of value to others.
    I feel the ache in this.
    Joe