My soul knew you long before you came,
explaining the joy I knew on your arrival.
Long ago, I hand selected you and reserved you.
Six of Heaven's choicest souls, chosen by me.
Each soul so delicate, and intricately different.
I hid you safely among mist and cloud to wait
until your time arrived and then I called softly
guiding you home to parents anticipating the joy
of you, and your arrival after so long of a wait.
One by one you joined us, until all are present now.
And we are whole, complete in our family, and content.
A contest entry
- Will you pick flowers or points? Maybe both? by Sonja.
435 points, ended July 19, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very interesting beginning:
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My soul knew you long before you came,
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It is nice to know what do you want, also is nice to know to express your feelings with poetry. What could be better than a happy and complete family?
Also, Six of heaven as a title is at the same time a soft and strong declaration of love. Nice poem.
~Sonja~
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