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Kitten Love

When a kitten shows love
to rub against our leg
or wants to be pick up.
So we pick it up or pat it.

Also, kitten would sit or lay
on our warm lap
to go to sleep for a little.
She will purr softly.

When they purr they are
usually are so happy
that they have someone
to love and care for them.

Kittens gets lonely, too
but they might have a buddy
to sleep and to play with.
So they can be friends.

But if they don't have one
they want love from us.
Some kittens might meow alot
to get some attention.

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Kittens are so cute!

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  • SweetRoses
    November 6, 2008

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    Kittens are very cute. And so fluffy with their soft fur. Great write. It's a nice tribute to the wonderful kittens of the world.


  • onesugar gold member
    July 27, 2007

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    Cats/kittens have so many different personalities
    and they always pick the best seat in the house
    for their bed.
    A lovely write
    Hugs onesugar


  • krosebug
    July 23, 2007

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    I to love kittens! I have a fat cat named Angel! I like the way kittens act silly and pounce and hiss when they are little! Your poem is very well written! Kaylea

  • kittykatie79
    July 23, 2007
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    I like it very much

    that is a wonderful poem


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    July 23, 2007

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    I just love cats and their personalities are all so different...you have described the sweet little kitten to a tee...Thank you sweet one for the smile


  • bethan-gaze
    July 20, 2007

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    This is really pretty ... it reminds me of our cat when she was a kitten ... you describe them perfectly!


  • Tabitha-Robin
    July 20, 2007
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    Yet another beautiful write. Thank you for sharing with me. Keep penning my dear.


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    July 19, 2007

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    Another beautiful piece..now I want a kitten..lol..
    Thank you for sharing these with me..
    Peace
    ~A~


  • iamthebeatles
    July 19, 2007
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    how cute
    I love kittens, they are so playful and nice. we just got one recently, and this poem describes him so well. Bravo! it seems you have learned alot about the english language, and you write it very well. Hope to read mre of your poemsa soon!
    *peace*


  • melphleg gold member
    July 19, 2007

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    warm

    That was warm and sweet. I'm sure cat lovers like my niece would appreciate this. It is full of affection and tenderness. One critique "they are usually are" is too many "are's." One one verb is required.


  • JoyfulWriter
    July 19, 2007
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    Very beautiful! I love kittens...thanks for sending..enjoyed the read...smiles, Terry


  • Amera gold member
    July 19, 2007

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    ahwww... you knew i have a cat when you sent me this link. This is beautiful and made me smile. You penned an image of the purest kind of love and the cutiest givers. Thank you.

    Love,
    Amera ♥


  • Sunday Rain
    July 19, 2007

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    My kitten does that a lot,
    & she's been doin' it a little more often,
    *smiles*
    lately,
    She just comes up,
    Meow's
    & she just wants to be loved...


  • Katie Lazette
    July 19, 2007

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    Beautiful Poem

    I love little kittens, they are so cute and playful. They roll over and jump and lie on their back and swat at things. I would have a kitten, but I am allergic to them. Keep up the good writing.


  • BXs Finest
    July 19, 2007
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    very true....and they r cute...I LUV animals...so these poems really interest me....


  • Ephiphany
    July 19, 2007
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    Yeah

    kittens are cute as well. I love animals. So passionate with nature. This was great
    P


  • michellemybelle gold member
    July 19, 2007

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    you describe a cute little kitten so well
    it seems in every species, the babies bring out the nurturing side in us
    best to you,
    Michelle


  • Namita
    July 19, 2007

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    This si very sweet. Kitterns are very angelic. Very nice visualization and execution! Keep up the good luck.

    Luv,
    Canyd


  • cutiepie gold member
    July 19, 2007

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    I love the way they move....they have such a feline walk, with tails held straight up and hopping on tip-toes Delightful poem


  • ShelleyA gold member
    July 19, 2007

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    A very nice write. You've captured the personality of a kitten very well. I could visualize what your wrote. Nice expression of feeling. An enjoyable read.


  • grannyeri gold member
    July 19, 2007
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    Kittens are so cute and are just like little children wanting our attention and some companionshop. Thanks for sharing this cute little poem with me. We do so like to keep them company too. Liked the sentiments you have expressed so well in these lines.


  • ButterflyforChrist
    July 18, 2007

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    very cute dear!
    Growing up, and living still on a farm I've experienced many kittens and each time I've been in awe of the amazing journey they take. God has blessed us so much here.

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