The defined muscles in your body,
Perfection,
The scruffy facial hair,
Ignites passion inside of me,
Your presence turns me on.
The smell of your masculinity,
Excites my every sense,
When you run your fingers over my body,
My lust for you grows.
The way you kiss my back,
When we make love,
Ecstasy,
You are my soul partner.
The feel of your lips around my manhood,
Pure pleasure,
I find my need for you is uncontrollable.
Each day I wake up and watch you sleep,
You look so peaceful.
The tenderness we share,
Has become a part of my every day life.
Without you my world is empty,
We may be gay but we’re beautiful.
Author notes
I wrote this for a side challenge. My challenge was ..........slipperssun challenges Countrybabe......to write something sensual for gay men...
This poem got an Honourable Mention in the contest The Erotic Challenge (side challenge) by Master Ktulu on July 26 2007.
Please tell me what you think
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I like that you've given depth and meaning to something that is so often unrecognized by those other than the two involved.
Your poem is gently and subtly erotic and also very loving. A great job of expression of love and feeling in this write.
Dee
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"Your presence turns me on"
I really like this line, it makes me think about
how, when you love someone, they can be doing nothing
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Well this was a tough challenge but you did a wonderful job,
well done and good luck in the challenge
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this was wonderful for a difficult task you was given. but you took the task and made something beautifal and sensual. another wonderful write best of luck in the contest
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well handled, this was well writen
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"Each day I wake up and watch you sleep,
You look so peaceful.
The tenderness we share,
Has become a part of my every day life."
Loved these four lines
Well done babe on a truly tender poem!
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sweetness, you definatly rose to the challenge on this one.... i love the way that it reads and it is surely sensual like i asked... i rate you a 9 and half cos it took me a bit to see the gay in the write(aside from pic) sweetness you show me that you can meet every challenge thrown your way... well done
cheers
Jen
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Thanks baby. I had a hard time writing it broad enough to make the gay stand out. Sorry bout that.
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This is very good, very sensual and beautifully written. I think that Jen would like this very much as well. Good luck.
**Master Ktulu** -
Ah, I am sure they would appreciate this. Well written.
*kisses*
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Absolutely beautiful ... I love the sensuality of this write ... Slipperssun will be very pleased ... I wish to enter this as well ... hopefully Slipperssun will add me
but altogether beautiful darling ... you have done a wonderful job ... portraying gay love ... it is one of the most romantic writes I have read in a very long time ... and you are right ... Gay men are beautiful ... Nicely penned darling ... Thank you for sharing it with us ... and the background as well was very beautifully done ... you are my hero 
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