my guts were
lying by my
fishnet
feet
and
they twisted
into a
sailboat
origami baby wants to play
and the ambulance
played on
like a soundtrack
broken broken record
soundtrack
i'm a monster movie
with no
monsters
just twisted skin
and doll parts
dead dogs covered in
venom
and
fungus
their veins twist
into the ground
and
the fossil fuels
are burning
and i can hear the
nitrogen singing
they hum and clap
sixty-two dead men
with blue lights
and yellow ties
i'm an
ancient dragon baby
with cables tied to your
tongue
and
grave diggers
(or is it..
gold diggers?)
plundering in the
catacomb of your
local
local
alien pod
it's not nice, they say
when they're
strapped to the
fetus on your back
it's not nice, they say
when they're
falling down all
broken broken baby
chasing a
blue light
no, it's not
nice at all
when you're
gathering your guts
on the cement
hurry, hurry
grab those
acid tablets
before
mother superior
comes with her
switch
and
zombies
carrying
bibles in their
loose gums
there's no teeth
only
bits of
Jesus
and
little boy
doll parts
i'm an
air-filled
water tank
they say
i say that's
not nice
with an acid tablet
in my mouth
and my guts
crawling up my
purple
fishnet
feet
my
yellow
baby
bird
syndrome
my
broken
broken
record
syndrome
Author notes
Oh my God.
I missed ap so much.
Mainly writing.
I hate writing on paper.
It really, really sucks.
Really, though, am I still insane?
Rate me on a 1-10 line.
1 being the lowest and 10 being the highest.
Love you, love you, yes yes I do
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I'd give it an 8, it was hectic and insane, which are great things, but a few lines seemed a bit forced as if you were trying to hard, but that might be because it sounded akward, but that would be my problem, although i did really like the direction you went with this, still i know you can do better
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Well, an 8 is good for my first poem in like...four months. Thank you, though. It was kinda forced. I agree. =[
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Alex, you fucking 10, sex me up right here right now, inside a freezer [we'll melt the ice cuz we're so fucking hawt]
Shit, I could feel an orgasme crawl up from the bottom of my toes and reach the top of my skull when I read this. mhhhmmmm it was delicous.
Why did you have to go for sooooo sooooooo soooooooooo long? I missed you damnit. There was less insanity in this place and that made everything... *in low whisper* scary! It was like that sence in Ed Wood with the camera going down that dark hallway and all you hear is the guy playing Bela Lugosi screaming his face off....
... yeah... it was empty.
jesus inside a cherry popsicle I love you.
I want to eat you... I'd become a canibal for you ♥
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Fuck. Fuck. Fuck.
I can't even reply.
Your comments are too delicious and sexy. I'm going to cry.
Fuck.
Baby, I'd be your goddamn steel dildo AND your heart-shaped vibrator if you asked me to.
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Luff you Alex
OMG OMG OMFG!
I missed you so so so so so so Much Alex. and yes, you're still insane but I fucking luff it. OMG babi, what have you been doing?! This another insane poem, but it's fucking amazing. It's so twisted and insane and orgasmic and all the other words I can't think of now all rolled into a blankey of OMG and doused in orgasm.
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OH MAN. THANK YOUUUU.
Cause I wrote this earlier and I was getting all depressed saying OHMYGODILEFTANDEVERYONEHATESME. Because I got -0 comments. And yeah. Yeah. Oh well. I don't know what I've been doing. OH! I do. I started writing stories and stuff. Yeah. I MISSED YOU TOO! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 -
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OMG, you've got to let me read some of them...And OMGICOULDNEVERHATEYOU! You're my sexi loony bin baby, and remember, we still have an appointment with Smurfette and the Schoolgirl manatee....You've been keeping them waiting.
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It's just cheesy badly written slash with the occasional hot sex scene. The first couple of chapters are REALLY REALLY terrible. BUT it gets better. Sort of. I don't know. Other people seem to like it. I have 556 reviews. Well. 555 because one is bad. So...yeah. ANYWAYS, that's true. We do have a Smurfette/Schoolgirl manatee appointment. How could I forget? I'll get the crayons if you'll get the rope.
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I have plenty of rope, do you want to itchy hemp rope or sexi silk rope or what? Oooo, chains and handcuffs might be nice too.
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