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I stand anxiously behind the black curtain,
as I await my entrance to my domain.
I stride out with confidence, and determination.
My desire burns with excitment.

The light beams hot on my face,
to light up my passion, strength and weakness.
The words slide from my tongue with a profound grace.
My voice booms with power and emotion.

Standing on the stage that is my house,
I reach out and invite everyone in,
to experience the true reality of life.
I taste victory as I watch them cry, laugh and be amazed.

My emotional roller coaster of a performance,
comes to and end.
Just as powerful as it had begun.
The theater resounds with enjoyment.
My heart fills with accomplishment,
as I take my bows with my family.

Like a child,
I wait impatiently for the next ride.

Author notes

UnhappyJester be my name and my passion is Theater. To be on stage and give a performance of a life time makes me truly and undoubtedly happy. I hope you enjoy this poem as much as I did while writing it.

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  • SeansterMonster
    July 28, 2007
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    Not Bad

    I like your description of your enjoyment. Use more analogies and similes, but overall great!


  • Wild-N-Wiccan
    July 18, 2007

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    Amazing

    Wow Michael, simply amazing, the imagery was beautiful, like i was in the audience watching you. Simply amazing. wow, wow, wow..


  • Anfractuous
    July 18, 2007
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    It's lovely. A great passion. Good luck to you.