Today,
black cabs can be
red, blue, green
even silver.
Because black (and white)
is never that simple.
There’s always a clause
between the lines
trying to rip you off.
Just like those
(never) black cabs.
- Taxi Please.
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Very Enjoyable
Your title,'Taxi Please',had a very appealing sound to it,it compelled me to read this poem and must I say I was not a bit dissapointed- ithas a rather refreshing ring to it- it is so open to interpretation -'Today,black cabs can be red, blue, green even silver.'-you can expect anything -just about anything at all-'Because black (and white)
is never that simple.'- I have to agree here both black and white are so empowered -'There’s always a clause between the lines trying to rip you off.Just like those (never) black cabs.'-the unexpecting expectable-the last line too sums up the matter of fact tone of the poem - about and life continues,'Taxi Please'
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Thank you very much for your indepth feedback of my poem. I always like to know what the reader's interpretation is.
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very good work
Hey I assume its about the great divides of life at large...I am not sure if i understood right....
You have been very crisp in carrying the flow of this one...
I was looking for your author notes...
Anyway...Enjoy....
God Bless!!!
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It's just about how things are never just what they seem these days. There's always a catch. I didn't think I needed authors notes as I thought it was clearly said in the poem. Word for word almost. Thanks for your comment.
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