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A Single Rose

A single rose
lay upon her breast
held only
by her delicate fingers
that had just days before
curled her sweet girl's hair.

 

The wedding was such
a lovely sight,
her daughter dressed in white,
Grandmama's pearls
at her throat
as if they'd been laid there
by an angel's hand.

 

She had so painstakingly
brushed every strand,
twirled every curl,
kissed each tress
as she coiffed
her baby girl's hair
and pinned on the veil
so perfectly.

 

Standing back,
she looked at her child
who had become a woman
overnight,
tears stung her eyes,
but not yet,
she could not allow it
until the ceremony
had begun.

 

Her body wracked with pain,
she arose
as the young woman
came ever closer,
and stopped to kiss her mother
before taking the hand
of the man
to whom she would now pledge her life.

 

"Hold on," she pleaded
with herself,
knowing she would soon
take her last breath,
but she refused to go
until her darling girl
was wed.

 

In the night
she was called home
by her Father,
on angel wings she arose
into the Heavens
where the precious hearts go,
for she had always been
a most precious one.

 

Angels sing her name
and tears mourn her passing,
but Heaven shines
much brighter
as her earthly hand
holds a single rose.

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  • Kim6
    August 22, 2007
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    Such a lovely poem. I love roses. Roses are so beautiful!


  • leo2
    July 18, 2007

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    As painful as those memories are I want to thank for bringing them back. My dear sweet Aunt Melba was laid to rest with one rose in her hand. This is beautifully sad.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


    • pattyann4500
      July 18, 2007
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      I'm sorry th bring back sad memories, but I'm sure they brought back the love you had for her. Thank you. Patricia


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    July 18, 2007

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    My Dearest Sis, with out the sorrow and pain of a final request, a step closer to heaven bourne in a last breathe, many of us will find the strength and determination to carry on until our final duty is done. This write, although sad, gives us knowledge in the fact that we know, with the help of trust, hope and faith, we too, will draw our final breathe only when we are finished with the world.

    You say, you don't know where this came from, try looking in your heart?, because to me, words like this don't come easy.
    Love of a daughters wish to see the smile and the tear of a mother on her wedding day, the biggest day of her life, is something that all daughters don't ask for, but want as part of the memories of the day.

    You have a way Sis, never lose it.


    • pattyann4500
      July 18, 2007
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      Thank you, Mikey. You do know my heart. I couldn't help but cry over this one. With my daughter being estranged from me, I guess I'll never see her in her wedding gown. Oh, well, life just goes that way sometimes. Love and hugs, Patricia


  • MargaretG
    July 18, 2007

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    sad

    I have heard about people who are able to stay alive for important events. Your first stanza was excellent foreshadowing, I knew it was going to be sad. One thing which I found confusing was "baby girl" instead of daughter. I loved the gesture of the bride's kiss, very affecting.


    • pattyann4500
      July 18, 2007
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      I was afraid that using 'daughter' too much would throw the poem off. Perhaps I was wrong.

      Sorry, the poem wrote itself. Blame if for being sad. LOL Thanks, Margaret.


  • thelordreigns gold member
    July 18, 2007

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    What a beautiful and bitter-sweet message about the power of a mother's love. Beautifully crafted Sis yet so deeply sad.

    Love and hugs - jo


    • pattyann4500
      July 18, 2007
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      Thanks, Sis. I have no idea where this came from today, but it just sprang forth. I have to say it made me cry to write it. I guess I've been thinking much about my own daughter lately. Hugs, Patricia

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