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Mothers Child...After All...

"Mirror mirror on the wall
    I am my mothers child
                      After all..."

Your actions play as mine
Even though I try to hide them
Telling myself I'm nothing like you
People are their own
But everything I say or do
Brings me crawling back to that shadowed mirror
I look at you and all I see is me
staring back
  trapped
Lies
    deceit
Faces I hide
My outside a disguise.
To cover the truth that only you and I can see
For we are one, as they say
...and nothing seems to take that away...


"Mirror mirror on the wall
    I am my mothers child
                      After all..."

Author notes

Erm...I know the saying from my family...but the poem, I think, really didn't fit well enough, and it wasn't deep enough. But..oh well.

P.S....Mirror mirror

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  • Ignis Corpus
    July 18, 2007

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    well if it came from you then dear, it is deep enough. good job on this piece i loved it, accually, i wish you the best of luck in this contest,
    Beautifuldisasterxx