Sweet reflection of mine, why the long face?
I haven't bruised up myself, don't feel this way. It's killing me.
Did it ever occur to you, you look better than the real side?
you have Heaven on your side, while I am redeemed to route in Hell. Farewell.
Why do you wish to escape? You have the world you dreamed of, please don't hurt me.
Why try to break our connection? When we together are one. Stop. No. Please.
You are not the failure. I am. For being an incosiderate prick. Don't hate yourself.
Sweet reflection of mine, don't wound up your face. Let me do it instead. Falling.
These scars shall be invisible to any ones eyes,
for they come from the heart and fall into the soul.The glass world you live in,
did you knew, It's unbreakable. You may try, but never suceed. Please stop.
I can't stand it anymore. I need to breathe. You're intoxicating my veins.
Stop. Don't be so stupid. It's killing ourselves. STOP! PLEASE!
I need you alive. No! Don't leave me. Not now. I...Forgive...You!
She stopped. Reflection faded. No. she's...Gone.
Sweet reflection, why? You knew he loved you,
more than meets the eye. he loved you more than he loved me,
please give up to me, please.
I can't believe what I just did, I broke the mirror and cutted my wrists.
If I can't have you no one can. So without my reflection, I can't stand.
She leaves I leave, she eats I eat,and if she dies I have to give in.
I'll miss you, even though deep inside we hated each other, I'll miss you.
You were my only enemy who did not attempt to kill me. Forgive me.
Sweet reflection of mine, please, wait for me...
♥The End♥
Author notes
Just what you wanted. Mirrors.
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A contest entry
- Mirror Mirror by Ignis Corpus.
500 points, ended August 1, 2007, 40 entries
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This is a very dark poem. It is an amazing write. I can relate to it. My favorite lines are :
can't believe what I just did, I broke the mirror and cutted my wrists.
If I can't have you no one can. So without my reflection, I can't stand.
She leaves I leave, she eats I eat,and if she dies I have to give in.
I'll miss you, even though deep inside we hated each other, I'll miss you.
You were my only enemy who did not attempt to kill me. Forgive me.
Sweet reflection of mine, please, wait for me...
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this is dark and emotional
a very sad write that shows great emotion in every word you poured onto this page. i have been in your place and it is hard to stare yourself in the eyes and speak to the demon that you with hold beneath the lies. and when you finally agree to set the demon free you hurt only yourself and others who love thee. great write dear.thank you for sharing it with me and thank you also for your comment on my write. -
wow i really like this one it's good
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very dramatic
A sad tale of "reflection' This is very well written poem and the story unfolds smoothly and tells a sad tale..."please wait for me" says it all. WASP.
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hmm i dono what to say really, i did like it though, it was pretty good. i loved it, sounds like me in a way, good job on this piece and i will wish you the best of luck in this contest,
beautifuldisasterxx
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