demons shape shifted into
‘angels’
but still kept
stormy auroras,
their trickery worked;
bribing man with treats
seducing -
& invisibly chalking adultery
on foreheads,
to steal slaves
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired - Lunchtime Quickie by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended July 18, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Shoot.
Comments
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Hood-Winked!
haha ... was this the 10-line poem you wanted to give me?
It's great on it's own. The imagery as always is the most powerful and domineering thing in your poems. This one was no less in that content. (sorry if I don't sound english :S )
by the way - today is the surprise
NeveR ♥
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only honorable!!! THIS is great! loved it...maybe because i am the gullible one....
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interesting and clever bid on words, i like this you did a great job on this, i enjoyed it, keep it flowing and congrads in the contest
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I can see demons and angels in that picture. Nice take on it. Good job.
Good luck and thank you for entering
Storm
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