Tender sorrow as
you left me in my dreams;
alone and yearning.
Thorned petals bite
bitterly into my reverie.
Your breath lingers
upon my lips...
just one more kiss
I wished to steal.
Gently, I will close my eyes
to weep;
I know your love is gone,
forever and always.
Author notes
Prompt: Used picture
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In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie ~ 10 x 50 x 30 ~ Reserve Your Spot Now! ~ by Celticmoon.
300 points, ended July 18, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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When they go , they are gone
gosh How I hate that! Remember pay backs are another story. They wear a differemt shoe also. so there mac good write good job.
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It is hard enough to bid farewell knowing still they will return, but to do so knowing no return will follow is even more so. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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