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Perfect In The Rain

Roses are everywhere,
Roses in my head,
Roses by the only door,
But all the roses are dead.

Just like you.

The walls are getting mossy now,
It's been a long time since we last came around,
I don't think this house will stand much longer.

It's dead.

Roses everywhere,
Roses in my head
(It's cloudy up here)
Roses by the only door
But all the roses are dead.

Just like you.

Just like me,
Just like my hope,
Ff ever falling back into
Place.

And my faith,
Is breaking,
Like the seems on a broken dress..

I don't know
Who i am.

And the skin that hides my face melts away,
And I know,
That they can see,
That this lie was only perfect in the rain.

Roses are everywhere,
Roses in my head,
Roses by the only door,
But all the roses are dead.

Just like you.

And for that I'm really sorry
But
We're dead.

Here,
And it's cold so far away from the fire,
Won't you hold me close so we survive this.

But I suppose that we're already gone.

Just like you.

And for that I'm really sorry
But
Were dead.

Here,
And it's cold so far away from the fire,
Won't you lie next to me so we survive this
Chill

But I suppose that we're already gone.

That this lie was only perfect in the rain,
In the rain,
In the rain.

Because this lie was only perfect
in the rain.


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  • Candy6
    July 18, 2007
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    Very original! A beautiful poem. Nice imagery.