Sisterly Love

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As I wake up in the morning
to see the rising sun
I take a drink of water
to have a morning run

all alone with no companion
No love or family
Here is my submission
Can You be a sister to me

so short and to the point
beyond imaginal belief
take away my lonliness
as a sister to relief

Give me guidance and laughter
smiles and joy to share
I shall be your sister
to love and fully care

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Author notes

Sister application

Quiet-Thunder-Lady

A contest entry

I Want More Family (prewrites allowed) by SoftlyScreaming. 525 points, ended July 20, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Looking for AP Family by HeavensNewestAngel. 900 points, ended October 5, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A New Family. by Abby In Chains.. 450 points, ended November 8, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Please tell me what you think

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Abby In Chains.
October 24, 2007

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i love it!
automatic sister just for being so cool.

Abby.

OH p.s. i need your name if i am to add you.
HeavensNewestAngel
September 19, 2007
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Great poem you wrote. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck
forbidden-colour
August 16, 2007
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Awwwh.
This is sweet.

Good luck in my contest, <3
and thank you for entering <3
Heartbeatsxfading
July 19, 2007

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This is a wonderful poem, but the contest called for dirty pretty&& this strays much away from it.

But I would be glad to have you as my sister
storiesuntold
July 18, 2007
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Beautiful
This is really great and such love and kindness in it .
kennethlaney
July 18, 2007
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Very good poetry!
Hey Jasmine Pina,
How are you? Just yelling.
Good poem Ms. J. Pina!
SoftlyScreaming
July 18, 2007
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awwwwwww this is really sweet of you... when the contest ends i will tell you who you will be in my family, but i would love for you to be my sister.
can you please ap mail me so i know who you are though and if you dont mind putting your ap sn in the an than i would really appreciate that