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You're lovely

I'm just drawn to you
and your beautiful face
it's like I've known you forever
and nobody can take your place

my heart has gone out to you
as your words have gone so deep
I wish i could hold you hold
at night when you lie down to sleep

I wish I could hear your voice
and touch your sweet soft hands
you know I'll help you through it all
your wish is my demand

I'h here for you darling
for what ever you may need
wether it be a shoulder to cry on
or someone to be truthful and clean

I'll wipe away your tears
and write you words so softly
Darling I just wanted to let you know
you are so beautiful, you're lovely

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ap sn XcrimsonXtearsXfall and yes it is a love poem lol

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  • Mc25
    July 18, 2007
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    oh god i know this feeling well
    wanting someone so bad that they are all that you think about morning and night
    apparently it inspires people to write poetry that is beautiful and slightly creepy (but in a good way lulz just joking)
    i especially enjoyed the first stanza!


  • SoftlyScreaming
    July 18, 2007

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    wow.. you stole my breath away.. i hope im right, but is this like a love poem? cause if it is i love it.. i want to get to know you, i want you to put your ap sn in the AN and then i want you to ap mail me so we can talk.. i really like you already