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paper bags

the things that kill us
make us weak
are sold on the shelves
of every street

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  • Joy.To.The.World
    September 14, 2008
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    This is very true. I like this one alot.


  • Ephiphany
    July 18, 2007

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    Hey,

    this is a strong message...I liked this, please keep in touch with ur new work, sometimes, I get all tied up
    Piff