Bothered by your reflection
Another sad attempt at resurrection
How can I move on
How can I make a new beginning
When all I see
Is your face, haunting me
All the words I've used
Are worthless to your memory
Because still, it's haunting me
Author notes
Evanescence- My Immortal
A contest entry
- Music and Leadership by Star-of-David.
700 points, ended July 31, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very good
your interpretation of this poem is very good..all the words I've used are worthless to your memory.. excellent line..
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Woah....this one sent a chill down my spine when I read it. I like it a lot, the imagery is very powerful, you can imagine this going on really clearly.
"Another sad attempt at resurrection."
This line is awesome, it fits so well with the talk about the mirror, about how trying to get something back ends in failure.....this is great on every level.
Thanks for entering, good luck in the contest. -
I really like this.
"Are worthless to your memory"
And the Evanescence song is like amazing
xxx
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