'today I'm going to use my far greater intelligence to find a way to...'
you're boring...
'quit talking to me...I'm trying to write my thesis...'
you dont even exist how are you writing a thesis...
'shut up...'
haha
*boom*
*crash*
'You're missing out on some pretty kickass lightening storms. The thunder is so loud I cant even hear myself think! Its totally awsome! '
well, if you cant hear yourself think. . .you need to stop paying attention to the voices in your head. . .
'but why? They play and then rewind and then play again random events that are part of a past that is not even mine..I find it so very interesting how could I possibly ignore the voices? Besides...if I do....they'll kill teddy....I dont want them to kill teddy...I need teddy....'
I think you'd annoy the crap out of yourself if there was another you
'yeah. . .i'd end up dead one way or the other. . .wait. . .are you calling me annoying. . .'
Dude
'...'
Duuude
'....'
DUDE!
'what?'
Your talking to yourself again...outloud...and everyone can hear you
'those idiots...those fools...they will think I'm crazy..but I'm not..I'm not crazy...I'm not!'
your talking to me..i dont exist...you are so crazy dude...
'I am not crazy... I'm just a random piece in your imagination and you only think I'm talking to myself when in reality...i'm not even here...'
what
'no one else sees me'
shut up, quit talking to yourself
'you shut up!'
Mr Landon, thats unacceptable....sleeping in class really! And dear, quit talking to yourself..
'Yes ma'am...'
A contest entry
- Today I'm going to use my .......... by Melodies.
475 points, ended July 20, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
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huh...a suprise ending...very nice...this kinda reminded me of that sucidal tendancies song instatutionalized...easpecially the whole "I'm not crazy" part...I loved the arguement you went through...easpaecially the kill teddy part...that was pretty funny...great poem about talking to yourself...this is the first poem I've ver read on the subject...awesome job...keep it up
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mmmm having got a clue what this is but next piece of text made me smile, so for that you can have a lil yellow man who is being helt at gun point, what worries me is that he is smileing lol
'but why? They play and then rewind and then play again random events that are part of a past that is not even mine..I find it so very interesting how could I possibly ignore the voices? Besides...if I do....they'll kill teddy....I dont want them to kill teddy...I need teddy....'
good work
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lol
Thank you, I like that part too, I was laughing as I typed it!
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So do I very much (she said through clenched teeth, eyeing the trophy, green with envy).
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Conspicuously Excellent!
Off the charts for fine and clever! 
I am delighted to read this entry because it displays impressive talent and creative thought. 
I might also add that I love it.
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