,Original' makeup and ,interesting' hair,
{{the kind of girls that used to scare them
as they crossed the road, clinging tight to mommy's hand}}
Haunting sordid street corners, stare intensely into eyes of passers by,
... they puff away their life in faded smoke rings
Author notes
i often hear people kind of like this refered to around the phrase 'you know the type', and then the person goes on to decribe them in a completely stereotypcial way. its sad how people can change so much.
A contest entry
- Quickie! 10 Entries! 5 lines! Picture inspired. [In honour of me finally beating the amount of contests held by Gaylene] by Naridill.
300 points, ended July 19, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great job...congrats on the bronze...I really liked this, the last line was spot on...Well Done!!
Wyatt xxx
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Love it! And authors comments adds effect. But did you mean change as in peoples judgements change, because changing is a part of growing.
But none-the-less, I love this piece.
Thanks for entering, much luck. -
Oy!
Love how You put words in parenthesis
How I want to say:
So True
Love Your Author's Comments!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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