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Toxins

Toxins
((political carbon monoxide))
slips underneath closed doors
and between bedsheets
                (stained).
Moral malfeasances.
               


Rottom perfume
clinging to pinstriped suits.
Power is the nightshade of politics.

(corruption).

An ironclad contract
with Destruction.
Fathering
all the rotting poisons in the sky. 

Author notes

I'm thinking the "gentle persuasion" of money, power, and greed in politics today.

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  • poet2angels gold member
    July 18, 2007

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    wow!
    Great take on the prompt...You went a different diretion...great job..Great metaphor

    Ty for entering!

    Lynda

  • poet2angels gold member
    July 18, 2007
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    your prompt is:

    "gentle persuasion"