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Love's Embellishment

Gossamer colors bind
  passions of a lustful mind

Captivated by seduction's trance,
  playing forth in lover's dance

Secluded 'neath the blushing moon,
  possess me love, upon the dune

Ebb and flow with the tide
  teasing flesh; pleasure's cry

Bring high the peak of ecstasy;
  embellish the silky flesh of me

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Prompt: Embroidered Silk

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  • Celticmoon
    July 18, 2007

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    And alas you have penned the only piece of rhyme in this contest. Done in such manner that I became so lost within your words and images that I did not even notice the rhyme until the end. Wonderful! Thank you for entering and good luck!

    Blessings
    Bel


    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      July 18, 2007
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      What can I say... I am a sucker for rhyme-usually!

      Thanks
      Storm


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    July 18, 2007
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    This is a beautiful write and the rhyming is unforced. Good luck in this contest. Peace, Liz


  • poet2angels gold member
    July 18, 2007

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    This is beautiful in word choice, rhyme and flow...Amazing write!

    Lynda


  • Celticmoon
    July 18, 2007
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    Your prompt is: Embroidered Silk


    Or


    The picture on the main page

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