Lowered eyes
bespoke her
innocence,
stalwart stance
bespoke her pride.
Painted face,
can't hide her
beauty
satin gown,
cannot disquise.
She sill give herself
to someone
she will give her
heart to none.
Geisha girl,
inside your prison
meadowlark
with wings unbound.
A contest entry
- Quickie ~ 10 x 50 x 30 ~ Reserve Your Spot Now! ~ by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended July 18, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this was a beautifal poem. that was sliglty sad in places. but yet full of iamgery and emotion.
this was just beautifally written i loved every line of it.
the flow was amazing and captivate the reader.
a wonderful write well done
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I just wanted to add Good Luck in the contest xxx
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Absolutely Beautiful
I just loved this poem.It describes the world of a geisha in such a delicate way.You always write so beautifully, I always enjoy your poetry and admire your poetic ability. This is really beautiful xxx
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This is such a delicate beauty that has strands of sadness woven within the lines. I have to say the title really caught my attention. There is a music group of new age music named meadowlark and are very close personal friends of my Sissy in Arizona
. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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