Subtle influence
Suggestions of the heart
Trusting your feelings
I give up to gifted enchantment.
Melt me
Cordial denomination
Take me to your pillows
I shalt follow with desired guidance
Hold me captive with cuffs of,
compassionate stimulation.
Painless Domination
A contest entry
- Quickie 10/20/40 by poet2angels.
475 points, ended July 18, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow. that was beautiful. wow.. im speechless. I like how the poem it self is so short,and how the point is just so there... one can actually feel it. wow.. Thanks for sharing
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A sweet wonder! So beautifully written. Perfect combination...for...domination! Very nice indeed!!!
Blessings~
Az
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Sweet, Sensual
This was an awesome read for me. I can feel your words, yet it evoked so many thoughts of my own, with your every line. I loved it!
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Oooooooooo!
Oh but sometimes it hurts so good, lol. Nice work! I like this alot. The first stanza is amazing and following it with "melt me" me just made it better.
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Oh wow, this is different. Has this erotic thing to it, but doesn't take it to far, so that everyone will enjoy.
Nice job! -
I love your choice of words with this. Very sensual, very good work.
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Wow, no pain I think
such flowing thoughts go through the brain and wonders
how sweet it must be. Thanks so much for sharing this and wish you success in the contest. This is a winner.
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Beautiful
A very nice write here and my heart flutters with the suggestion here
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Whoa!!!
....show me the way to your bedroom....HE's SMOKIN!!!!!
Of course...you'll have to leave.....
...or maybe ...not?
hehe ~
Very nice job ~
Bear ~
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lol that was funny ..i have to leave ..well fine ! lol
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Thank you i am trying lol
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great job with the prompt!
Soft but sensual and romantic!
Beautifully done
Lynda
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your prompt is:
"gentle persuasion"
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