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Melt my heart

Just a nudge
a feathery urging,
lift your eyes,
and say my name.
Whisper softly,
in breathless wonder,
with silken hands
caress my skin.
Not overwhelming,
but understated,
petal soft
a gentle wind.
Melt my heart
and I'm ever yours.

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 18, 2007

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    aww this was so sweet and romatic.
    i love the feeling and emotions trapped into this poem
    it was soft and easy to read yet captivating at the same time
    a wonderful write wel done


  • poet2angels gold member
    July 18, 2007

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    I really really like this a lot! I recognize you again I think and that is a good thing ....Great softness to this....I love it...pretty!

    Lynda


  • Arkbear gold member
    July 18, 2007

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    Soft...lovely...........

    petal soft
    a gentle wind.
    Melt my heart
    and I'm ever yours.

     

     

    ........very nice,

     

    Bear ~


  • poet2angels gold member
    July 18, 2007
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    your prompt is:

    "gentle persuasion"