He lifts in lighter thought to bear,
my spirit, winged on faith and prayer.
In misted love of lofty heights
to soar with stars in shimmered light.
His questing Soul, not knowing never.
Gently cradled in his palms, as treasure.
Author notes
prompt: gentle persuasion
A contest entry
- Quickie 10/20/40 by poet2angels.
475 points, ended July 18, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow!
Love this piece You have penned busy bee and I found a way to read Your pieces
Oy!
So I'll be stalking
Powerful verse!!
especially my Spirit,
winged on faith and prayer...
Loved it and
Congratulations on Your HM!
Woooooooooo hooooooooooooooo
Best wishes too You
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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I wanna get one of those
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This is sweetnes layed in verse to bend the windy sighing judge...and leave them breating word to smile...lovely
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lovely rhyme!
Beautifully done and great for the prompt!
Lynda
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Wolfy..............
....a Lovely Quintet, with a couplet to soothe your write ~
Very nicely done on the rhyme as well ~
Genre...very pretty ~
Loved this..>>
my spirit, winged on faith and prayer.
Good luck,
Bear ~
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your prompt is:
"gentle persuasion"
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