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treason

 

worn dress of linen

clothes her now

as tattered stitch

unravels world

 

of weary lumbered

beast in slough

 

shedding silken tears

in shallow seas

 

where salt does lie in lick

such footsteps treaded heavy,

of yonder wicked beast

 

released

 

in greed to swallow

summer's moon, as fodder

 

choked in treason

 

 

 

 

 

 

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prompt: emboidered silk

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  • Celticmoon
    July 18, 2007

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    This is an impressive direction to have taken the prompt. Something I fully admit I had never even contemplated. Wonderful! Thank you for entering and good luck!

    Blessings
    Bel


  • Celticmoon
    July 18, 2007
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    Your prompt is: Embroidered Silk


    Or


    The picture on the main page