Cobblestones of Persuasion ~ ~ ~ by Arkbear at All poetry

Strolling, in thoughts

of togetherness,

remembering dreams of yesterday,

caught, in this very moment of time ~

Sacred finger holds my promise,

vows of truth, etched upon your heart,

cobblestones,

each, a reminder of our days, together ~

Stay with me,

forever ~

Author notes

10 of you have
20 minutes to write
40 words of wonder

make it beautiful and creative please

your prompt is:

"gentle persuasion"

Your thoughts are mine,

mine are yours,

we are one ~

A contest entry

Quickie 10/20/40 by poet2angels. 475 points, ended July 18, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Please tell me what you think

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Aurora Ceres
July 18, 2007

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This is truly beautiful. So tender and your words linger, teasing the senses, gently. 'Sacred finger holds my promise', reminds me of the innocence of the enduring pinkie swear. Thoroughly enjoyed this. Congratulations to you for the silver.

Best wishes,
Bella
- Arkbear
  July 18, 2007
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  Bella ~
  You are most kind to review in such a soft and gracious manner ~
  
  Thank you,
  
  Bear ~
- - Aurora Ceres
    July 18, 2007
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    You are more than welcome. This piece of yours, as well as others, deserve nothing less. It was my pleasure.
    
    Bella
tawk
July 18, 2007
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Timeless and beautiful as always. You are so gifted!!!
wolfspiritguide
July 18, 2007
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ah this is just beautiful, so full of softness.
StarEyes
July 18, 2007

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My Dearest Uncle,

Now you....What is up with this today?

Seems like soooo many of you are seeing into my heart and soul today.

This is amazing!! I love it!! What a great take on the prompt!

Best of luck to you in this contest!

and much love always

Nyetta
Patpowers
July 18, 2007
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A nice job again Arkbear. Very romantic and coming from the heart! Good picture too!!
poetsruletheworld
July 18, 2007
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This is so beautiful, what a wonderful capture of the prompt.
- Arkbear
  July 18, 2007
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  Thank you ~
  You are most kind to stop by with your review, and time to comment ~
  
  I shall try to do the same as time permits today ~
  
  Bear ~
BeautifulFlame
July 18, 2007
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I loved this!!! So nostalgic and sweet!
Goodluck!
- Arkbear
  July 18, 2007
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  You're very kind ~
  Thanks for taking the time to review this entry ~
  
  Bear ~
- - BeautifulFlame
    July 18, 2007
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    your most welcome!
Celticmoon
July 18, 2007

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Lovely Bear! Very soft and gentle and a true pleasure to read. Best of luck to you hun
- Arkbear
  July 18, 2007
  
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  Thank you Bel ~
  I see you found your inkwell
  
  Best of luck Hun ~
  
  ....oh....and btw....do you have enough Gold for that Bling, Bling YET???????????
- - Celticmoon
    July 18, 2007
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    I have decided to built a mansion from it all ......LMAO
  - - Arkbear
      July 18, 2007
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      Built?????
      ...you better buy a dictionary first!!!!!!
      
      ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!
    - - Celticmoon
        July 18, 2007
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        No, I just need more coffee...... A LOT MORE!
        
        LMAO
poet2angels
July 18, 2007

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This is beautiful....so perfect for the prompt. I love the ending.so soft and romantic!

Lynda
FloridaGatorQueen
July 18, 2007

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This is such a beautiful poem. It goes well with the prompt. Makes me wish I had a guy in my life. But I am in no rush. Been burned once and that was hard enough. Enjoyed the read!!!
poet2angels
July 18, 2007
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your prompt is:

"gentle persuasion"
poet2angels
July 18, 2007
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no scavenger hunts lmao
poet2angels
July 18, 2007
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good song, and I promise to be nice to ya this time