Slowly flowing
like smooth satin silk
into a crystalized pool.
Is it the fountain of youth?
Paradise perfect,
peaceful and calm
sailing away into Utopia
on a cloud of sensuality.
No need to take
planes or trains.
Just your imagination.....
Author notes
picture inspired
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie ~ 10 x 50 x 30 ~ Reserve Your Spot Now! ~ by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended July 18, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very good imagery, nice flow and congrates on the silver.. Some great works here yet again, you should be proud!
Peace, Timothy
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Your imagination can take you anywhere if you relax and let it. Wonderful imagery. Good luck
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Tis true, such places need not be traveled to by any thing but our own imagination. Lovely take on the prompt. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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Your prompt is: Embroidered Silk
Or
The picture on the main page
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