Fill my cup with feathered comfort,
world has sipped
my soul to sigh in wishes,
less wild to fly,
and now I need
what you can give,
passion's splash,
recreating
noodle curving softer reflection
to offering nourishment
in angelic confection.
A contest entry
- Quickie 10/20/40 by poet2angels.
475 points, ended July 18, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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"my soul to sigh in wishes,
less wild to fly"
Another lovely penning from your talented quill, dear Scribe...Indeed, you feed us all your feathered solace...methinks you must have wings yourself, my Friend...Good luck in Lynda's contest, Sweetie...
Wanda
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soft and beautiful.
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What a beautiful picture you have painted here. It is simple magic! I have to agree with many of the other comments! Beautiful!!!! Best of luck to you in this contest my friend!
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What an interesting title you have here. Somehow it reminds me of an Afrikaans song "daars 'n engel op Tafelberg" which means "there's an angel on Table Mountain". Soup is nourishment and when served with or by an angel one does indeed have a cup of softness.
~ Nicolette
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very beautiful!!!
Goodluck hun!
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-sigh-
Exquisite!
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Very nice.......
.....this is very nice indeed ~
Loved this..>>>
and now I need
what you can give,
passion's splash,
Best of luck to you ~
Bear ~
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This is so beautiful...Such a splash of genle persuasion..I love it...Perfect for the prompt...
Lynda
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your prompt is:
"gentle persuasion"
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lol don't let her drown
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