Eyes so innocent sitting in the next cubicle,
I whisper noon's hunger never expecting her to say yes.
She suggests her place for a snack, lives close by, has plenty of food.
Apartment door closes, she shows her true gourmet talents,
exposing wall of leather "appetizers," oh my, they stir the hunger!
Stirring with that whip brewing a bubbling and writhing stew,
it scalds in ecstasy, passing out from having thirds!
This angel it turned out, really had such practical horns,
back at work she hands me a note I think is passion's comment,
but turns out to be a bill for my feast!
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired - Lunchtime Quickie by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended July 18, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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LOL, great ending! You sure took this picture and ran, love it.
Nicely done.
Thanks for entering and good luck
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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Not what I was expecting, but wow! I have to admit I love it!! And that twist at the end, fantastic!! Who would have thought! LOL Best of luck to you in the contest!
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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you have such a great sense of humor, you always seem to be able to get that unexpected twist in there...love this and especially that ending
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