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inner sage

 

serpents slide

in seasoned spice,

as silk of skin bears trace of breath

 

released in searing

exhaled passion,

placed upon an amber breast

 

beat does shimmer, blacker image

stained as ink on paler page,

lingered touch in chanting season

 

pulsing heat of inner sage

 

 

 

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  • tara wilson gold member
    July 23, 2007

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    Congrats on the gold....I love this


  • omega13
    July 20, 2007
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    fter reading this, for some reason now I want to go out and buy condoms.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 18, 2007

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    Ooh, this is vivid. Love the images painted with your words. Very nicely done.

    Thank you for entering and good luck
    Storm


  • penman gold member
    July 18, 2007
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    Excellent

    Wonderfully sensous and stimulating write based upon the picture. Best of luck in the contest.