photographed words left red-eye
on self;
negative reflections
added pounds, thinning
doubted compliments.
perceptions scarred:
I became that distorted figure.
Author notes
picture-inspired
A contest entry
- Quickie ~ 10 x 20 x 15 ~ Reserve Your Spot Now! ~ by Celticmoon.
300 points, ended July 18, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Damn girl! This is dead on a powerhouse! I don't think I'd have ever thought of going for the photo metaphor. You sure have come a LONG way since you joined the site and I'm jealous hehehe You brilliant little bugger you ;)
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i do wish i could write like you. you words are so mesmerizing-great write
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hmmm, this is a creative and honestly golden poem i think you did a great job on it, keep it flowing and congrads on the contest
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superb write, very clever indeed. very well done indeed and congrats on yer trophy!
floorboards.
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wonderful and unique take on the pic...
As always, excellent poetry!
Lynda
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Low self esteem or lack of self love is a result for so many woman out there in this world today. You have interpreted this picture in a unique fashion that I guarentee most would not have. Lovely beauty in all its saddness. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Love
Mom
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Your prompt is: Captivating Wilds
Or
The picture on the main page
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