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Brushed

We painted desire
upon canvas;

love & lust
couldn’t blend-

we had no shades
of gray,
         
              only yin

and yang.

Author notes

Inspired by the picture & set of words "Captivating Wilds" =)

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 18, 2007

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    this was excellent and awsome. it painted a picture itself and was very vivid in the image section. a wonderful write. well dne


  • wolfspiritguide gold member
    July 18, 2007

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    excellent. this is really awesome, wish i would have thought of this lol, really great!


  • Celticmoon
    July 18, 2007

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    This is interesting Tyler. I like how you showed there was no middle ground but just opposites. Thank you for entering and good luck!

    Blessings
    Bel


    • Tangled Angle
      July 18, 2007
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      lol I thought it was too simple for me.
      I was in a rush- mom wanted the computer.
      Hopefully I can come up something more creative next time.

  • Celticmoon
    July 18, 2007
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    Your prompt is: Captivating Wilds


    Or


    The picture on the main page

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