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Pine

A pine thicket near my house.
So quiet, peaceful, inviting.
Lost in thought, I daydream.
Thinking of things to come.

A contest entry

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 19, 2007

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    nice ofn, i like this poem you kind of make me think of this spot i have where i sometimes go to think, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • HpWICKEDangel
    July 18, 2007

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    this is good. alomst captures the actually essence of the place. visiting there myself yes i know....
    Thanks for sharing.


  • Celticmoon
    July 18, 2007

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    Such tranquility you have brought forth within this piece. One that allows the mind to drift in a place of unlimited freedom. Thank you for entering and good luck!


    Blessings
    Bel

  • Celticmoon
    July 18, 2007
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    Your prompt is: Captivating Wilds


    Or


    The picture on the main page